Anger!
WALT: show not tell in our writing
Nicole stomped into the room. “JOLIEEEEEE!” Nicole yelled. Jollies looked like she had no idea what she had done. Nicole was furious and the she started to yell at Jolie. Jolie was sitting there in the corner wondering why Nicole was shouting at her; maybe she did something or said something she had no idea why? Nicole was so loud and terrifying Jolie didn't know what to do she sat there blocking her ears and getting more and more annoyed. Nicole looked very tensed and looked like she wanted revenge for something. Jolie got up and stood there waiting and wishing for everything to be over and go back in time to find out what she did wrong!...
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