Thursday, 25 August 2016

Writing Anger 23 August

Anger!

WALT: show not tell in our writing

Nicole stomped into the room. “JOLIEEEEEE!” Nicole yelled. Jollies looked like she had no idea what she had done. Nicole was furious and the she started to yell at Jolie. Jolie was sitting there in the corner wondering why Nicole was shouting at her; maybe she did something or said something she had no idea why? Nicole was so loud and terrifying Jolie didn't know what to do she sat there blocking her ears and getting more and more annoyed. Nicole looked very tensed and looked like she wanted revenge for something. Jolie got up and stood there waiting and wishing for everything to be over and go back in time to find out what she did wrong!...

Monday, 8 August 2016

Holiday letter

Alison 
57 School Road
Clive
Hawkes Bay



Thursday 28 July 2016



Dear Jzirah

Hey Julia how are you? I'm writing this letter to tell you what I did in the holidays. I did a lot of swimming; honestly I can't believe it is already over. On the first Sunday of the holidays it was Jolie’s birthday party we had it at the onekawa pools; she was turning nine I couldn't believe it ,she was growing up so fast! I remember when she was a little 5 year old girl she was so adorable; “right, back to the holidays”!


When we were at the pools it was so warm; it felt like a heater was on “ahh”. The first whiff I smelt was the chlorine. There were so many people I couldn't believe it. It was so loud, people were yelling everywhere.We found a table near the waterslide, the first pool we went in was the big cold pool to be honest it was quite warm. A few hours later we had lunch after that I thought I was going to blow up like a balloon. It was time to have cake; the flavour was chocolate with raspberry filling; “yummmm”.


On the last Sunday we went to Mt Ruapehu; me and my family decided it was time to have a holiday. When we got up there, we were so disappointed the ski field was closed I was so sad. We got up the mountain and we still were allowed to play in the snow; I made a humongous snowball and threw it to my dad. A few minutes later my hands got numb and we had to leave; my clothes were all soaked so I had to get changed. “BRUHHHHHH”!


I was so devastated that we weren't allowed to go on the skifield; oh well not everything goes as planed. I was so looking forward to going to Taupo on the way back; I asked my parents and they said yes. It was time to go back I was looking forward to going back to school and seeing my friends. These holidays were filled with lots of fun adventures , I hope you had a great holiday as well and had some fun.

Sincerely, Alison