Monday, 2 May 2016

Writing 100

This week we have done writing 100 I wrote about my holiday.
Here is my recount about my day at ocean spa.

In the holidays I went to ocean spa, I went with my mum and my sister.
The first pool we went in was the warm pool. We stayed in that pool for a while then we hopped into the cold pool. When we were in the cold pool it was freezing, me and my sister were shivering. Later on in the cold pool me and my sister were diving and jumping in and out of the pool. While me and my sister were in the cold pool my mum was relaxing in the warm pool.
Finally the day was over.

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